Give her a glimpse of what being with you would be like.
You’re active, fun, social – in short, you’ve got a fulfilling happy life and you happen to be looking for someone to join you in a few adventures.
But only a few can write presentable profiles and get the attention of quality seekers.
If you fail to do either of those two things, she’s instantly moving on to the next guy.
But if she likes what she’s seeing, she’ll keep reading – and more importantly, she’ll be way more likely to respond to your message.
Open with an exciting travel story or a humorous anecdote that hints at your personality.
In this example, the first line of this profile immediately gives her something pleasurable to visualize, so within the first couple words she’s already imagining her tropical vacation with you, filled with warm blue water and cute sea turtles.
If you just write “I’m a general contractor” and leave it at that, you’re missing an opportunity to forge that connection.